Shooting at the Hospital: Short Story
71I was hit by a car, was told that I had broken both my legs, five ribs,
and had a punctured lung. The doctor said I was lucky the bone fragments
didn't do any damage to the heart. I was also told that I had to spend
the next two months recovering in the hospital.
The first week
was the best, only because I was unconscious the whole time. The second
week was excruciating. I realized how much pain I was actually in. The
nurse that attended to me wouldn't give me the amount of painkillers I
wanted, and I went into shock multiple times.
The third and
fourth week, my ribs were not completely healed but better. They let me
freely roam the gift shop, the cafeteria and the waiting rooms. That was
cool but little did I know the last month was going to be absolute
mayhem.
My hands were spinning the wheel on my chair. I was going
quickly until a passing nurse stopped me, telling me to slow down, the
same nurse who wouldn't give me the painkillers. I was on the top
floor, looking to get back on the second, so I wheeled myself in the
elevator. All alone, I watched the doors shut and the humming of the
elevator filled my ears. Suddenly, it stopped and I waited for the doors
to open, unfortunately, they didn't. No more noises coming from above
or below me, but I knew, this elevator was going to be here for a while.
I reached over and hit the alarm button, nothing happened, so I tried
the phone. I put it to my ear... dead. All of a sudden the lights above
me shut off, cascading me into a a room of absolute nothingness. For a
moment I thought I had gone blind.
I dozed off, my head leaning
against the doors of the elevator. When I awoke, a pain struck my chest
and I realized the painkillers were wearing off. I opened my mouth to
scream, to call for help, to call for that nurse that would never give
me enough painkillers. The sound of my voice was unfamiliar. It was
hoarse and broken, the call for help came out more like a beg, or plead,
rather than a call. Once again, I dozed off, dreaming of my time back
home, where I played my Xbox, Facebooked my friends and completely
ignored my parents. I woke up with a start, disorganized, confused,
scared. I let my eyes wander and I soon realized I was in a hospital
bed.
It was a relief, but something didn't feel right. I glanced
down and saw wires hooked to me, machines beeping rhythmically, the
occasional head popping into the room. I realized something wasn't
right, and as if on cue nurse walked in. She told me that I was found
the elevator and that I should probably go back to sleep. I had to
agree, I was so heavy on drugs my eyelids felt like they weighed over
fifty pounds. I shut my eyes and let the monitor's beeping sounds put me
into a deep sleep.
Two weeks left. I slept a lot but when I was
awake I watched television, mainly medical dramas, I looked around the
room, no romance happening at this hospital.
I lay in bed,
waiting for the nurse to retrieve my medicine. Suddenly, a blasting
noise filled the entire hospital. What was that? A gunshot? No way.
Another blasting noise, this time closer, this time with a scream. It
all felt so unreal. I didn't rub my eyes or pinch myself like they do in
the movies, I could hardly blink, it just felt too real. A nurse ran
past my door, her scrubs were waving behind her. A second gunshot
sounded and the nurse dropped onto the tiled floor, limp as a child's
doll. I was terrified. A hospital shooting? Really? Here and now?
Absolute chaos. I threw my sheets over my head, thinking about how much
of an idiot I was, believing that the sheets would protect me. Sirens
wailed in the distance... what a relief. This "Mr. Shoot up the
hospital" was going down. Police officer's voices boomed, gunshots
blasted. The last thing I heard was, "We got a survivor," before, I
fainted. Fainted, how fainted? I couldn't believe myself!
I woke
up with the smell of chicken noodle soup in my nose. I stared up...
whiteness. I saw my girlfriend lean over and planted a kiss on my cheek.
My mom brought over a steaming bowl of chicken noodle soup. "So this is
what heaven's like," I thought to myself, "not bad."
It took me a
while and a lot of convincing that I wasn't in heaven and that I was at
home. Turns out I was out for three whole days, I passed out because
the adrenaline rushed out of my system to quickly or something like
that. The police had let my family take me home and take care of me
there, my mom wasn't about to take any risks with the hospital.
Nevertheless, it all wasn't important anymore, I was safe, safe back in
my bed, my comfy bed. I was home at last!







chuckandus6 12 months ago
Wow that is such a tragic story with a nice ending to it
is it true..if so Congratulations on making it back home
if not ...very imaginative writing
great hub either way